I fought with this bird-child piece for quite a while. The composition is strange, but trust me, it was stranger before I cropped it. Thanks to my son, who is an excellent critic, I was able to move away from elements I was hanging onto, and make changes for the better. I need some time away from this piece to effect more changes.
And, it’s blue:)
Comments on: "The Egg" (79)
I think this is a very fascinating and compelling piece.
Thanks very much Naomi!
Oh..it’s so surreal! The face on the egg!!!!
It is..:) A little creepy;)
Noooooo not creepy at all! I thought it was beautiful actually..hehe..well the face on the egg..you maybe right about the overall effect..LOL!
You are very kind. Thank you Shree:)
Nice to have in-house critiques that count. I too get the odd one that is helpful. Really interesting., kind of ‘creepy’ and yet very sensitive. Quite exceptional.
It is:) Thanks very much!
All the elements in this picture are exquisite and contribute to a compelling, tense ‘story’ but like you said, the way they relate visually within the space seems awkward. The solution *will* probably be pretty apparent after a little time away from this piece.
Thanks Gabriel
I looked through many of the illustrations that you posted.
I wish I had this drawing talent also! But alas….
My mom was an excellent artist. I used to watch her paint beautiful pictures, some with oils and others with watercolors.
Although I can write, I didn’t get that illustration gene. Sigh.
I didn’t get the writing one;)
I was left wondering why the bird child isn’t taking the food from it’s mother… does independence call?
perhaps this is a decisive moment
strange, dangerous, oddly spiritual…i love it
Thank you.
no problems, glad you checked in
Absolutely your best painting yet, Elena. I love the delicate bird child, the faint face on the surface–or perhaps inside the egg, the texture of the nest, and shades of blue. Bravo!
Thank you Jill!
Wow what a wonderful surprise! This was a real pleasure to open up to today – you captured so many fantastic moments in this piece, from the fairy’s grace looking over the young, the larger bird (Mom?) forcing the wee-one out of the nest and the little one, well she is just precious!!! You give a human element to this fascinating piece welcoming the viewers to experience their personal reactions to the fantasy. Your level of creativity makes you a very unique and gifted artist – fascinating being on this journey with you!
I humbly thank you Mary. I’ve so enjoyed having you along on the journey. Much appreciated.
So creative I loved it dear Elena, Thanks and Love, nia
Thanks Nia.
There is so much to look at in this painting, I was so absorbed in the egg and the bird child that I didn’t see the huge bird for ages. Is the child coming out of the egg or just nestling near it? I’m not sure. It’s strangely beautiful and slightly scary….
The bird-child is tempting fate-stay or go, seems equally scary. Thank you. I appreciate your reaction. It allows me to see it differently, which I really need to do. And, I do enjoy a bit of a scare:)
The Bird Child is gorgeous. Reminds me of my little one with her wispy hair 🙂
I’ve rescued a few little birds in the past … and maybe it is just the parent in me … but I want to reach into the painting and take her somewhere safe.
I promise I will care for her Elena. I’d raise her well! 😉
You’ve tapped into exactly the feeling I’m after. Thank you! That vulnerability, with danger lurking, but we’re not entirely sure from where it comes. Exactly the feeling of a parent letting a little one out into the world, anytime they are out of a direct line of sight. The protective quality that extends to any creature that is vulnerable. You must be the best Dad and protector of small things! I try to protect anything I can as well:) Thanks so much!
🙂 … thank you!
Elena I am having difficulty with this – and clearly it is my fault judging by the comments from others. While I admire your artistry as ever, I am not comfortable with the picture – I find it disquieting and disturbing.
I appreciate your comment Louis! I’m comfortable with disquieting. I’m after a sort of Grimm’s fairytale current. I’m disturbed with it beyond that however, seeking to make it a just plain better image. That’s why we keep making images-after that elusive…something.
quite dramatic … wishes to you and your son. 🙂
Thanks! Best to you too:)
The composition came out well, I think. Love the face in the egg.
Thanks Sheri
It’s an vision of blue, and well done your son. Sons are great critics, mine is!!
Thank you. We are fortunate!
Oh yes indeed 🙂
Beautiful . It reminds me of Arthur Rackham, but in a sightly softer style. 🙂
Oh my, I’m a great Rachkham fan. You are so kind. Thank you:)
None the less, it is quite spectacular!
Thanks Christina!
I love it! The moon! I love him!
Thank you!
(Answered my own question. I looked at it so long I forgot it had a title!)
Wow! So magical. First of all, LOVE this color blue and the lights and darks. So pretty! Is the face a reflection from the moon? A lovely and magical egg? The reflected face is so ethereal. Love the small one with her cute teeny face and awkward limbs too. I don’t have to know all the answers! It’s neat to have unanswered questions. (Unless you want to answer them.) ;D
Hi Cindy! The egg is lit from behind candeling the changling inside. But, it works as a moon too:)
I like it Elena. It feels a little dreamy to me, but then the face materialises in the egg which completely alters the picture. Good one!
Thanks Tom!
Luminous and beautiful. I like the slight awkwardness that’s going on – it works very well.
Her expression is precious.
Thank you Karen:)
Very interesting painting … but beautiful!
I like blue.
I would like to see changes you make!
Have a wonderful evening and many blessings!
Big hugs, much love, Stefania! 🙂
Glad you like the blue Stefania:)
Very interesting, indeed…
It has so many strange and yet warm connotations…
Thank you Carolyn
this is, i think, my absolute favourite of the things of yours i have seen. so lovely.
Thanks Janna!
I love that the background is more distinct than much of the foreground. It really leads your eye through the entire composition!
Thanks so much Micah:)
I must confess I have totally fallen in love with your bird children. I image them scampering around the landscapes you are used to photograph.
The bluish hue adds to scene a moon light quality I like very much
Marcelo, you’ve made my day. Thanks so very much:)
I love this piece! Beautiful!
Thank you!
Keep the work going! http://www.segmation.wordpress.com
Beautiful, sharp and soft at the same time. Well done for hanging in there with it Elena and listening to your son’s loving critique. J xx
Thank you Jane!
Strange, but beautiful. I think the composition benefits it – once you’ve seen it you can’t forget it.
Thank you Richard:)
The face in the egg is very cool. Beautifully soft detail.
Thank you Allyson Marie.
Love it, and would like to see the un-cropped version too.
Ok, I’ll revisit. Thanks Hansi.
Reflection of the face on the egg is stunning. Great image, Elena!
Thank you Arjun!
This is a very striking piece Elena, well done!
Thank you!
I’ve been so looking forward to seeing your next piece! You didn’t disappoint. LOVE this! But I love them all! But that face…is amazing!
You are so kind. Thanks much:)
For now, I’ll leave the writing in your capable hands:)
very interesting, Elena. Good you have your son to help you see it with fresh eyes. Always hard to do. You need to write a book to go along with these illustrations! 🙂